back to jail
thats where im bound
visit hell
7 long dropping hours
hurry the bell
make a excuse
i fell
cut my knee
i must sell
ticking of the clock
put in a cell
others make jokes
dare not tell
the abuse
awful smell
back too school
is this some kind of joke

Line 6 should say: make an excuse

Lots has been said in this brief but loaded poem and I love it. A real surprise at the end which makes is humorous and appropo to this time of year. Well done, Nice Write!!!!

It has excellent feeling… but very past presentation. Capitalize the first letter of every sentence, that